Rebellion Rose - When The War Has Ended
Oktober 01, 2011
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The weapon has silence
For some uphill struggle reason
Then let's this event just only a legend
If it can make some satisfaction
We can carry the tune of the battle song
After speechless and said nothing so long
Some of them didn't sure
Is that really pure
Or the freedom seems insecure
They woken up from the sleep
Realize it's only prototype
Like the power of the slave
in the occupation to escape
When the war has ended
For some uphill struggle reason
Then let's this event just only a legend
If it can make some satisfaction
We can carry the tune of the battle song
After speechless and said nothing so long
Some of them didn't sure
Is that really pure
Or the freedom seems insecure
They woken up from the sleep
Realize it's only prototype
Like the power of the slave
in the occupation to escape
When the war has ended
by : Isti Puspitasari
hallo...maaf ini tulisan asli anda atau bukan ya?saya rasa puisi ini tulisan saya.mohon ditulis aslinya yah. kan perlindungan kekayaan intelektual.mari belajar utk tdk menjadi plagiat.terimakasih.
BalasHapusUntuk pihak pemilik blog, tolong penjelasannya tentang Puisi yg dipakai!
BalasHapusInvestigator : pertama kali saya kira itu lirik lagu bukan puisi.
BalasHapusdan mbak isti bilang itu puisi dia :)
halo fakhru,saya udh dikonfirmsi,walopun bkn manajernya melainkan gitarisnya yg menghubungi saya.saya sgt brtrimakasih krn ada respon dr pihak rebellion rose.bgmnpun adlh hal yg penting.smoga mnjd pengalaman brharga bg qt smw.terusla berkarya bwt RR dn pemilk blog. semoga musik kalian diterima di sluruh indonesia,berjaya melebihi SID!!
BalasHapus@The Sezarach okey mbak isti :) teruskan karya anda :)
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